Water. By Mack.
I am learning to use
- punctuation in my writing
- spell words correctly in my writing
- improve my story
Success criteria: I can
- start my sentences with a capital letter
- end my sentences with a full stop
- use a capital after a full stop
- spell my spelling words correctly
- listen carefully for the sounds I can hear and write them down in order when trying new words
- check I have put full stops and capital letters in the right place
- check I have spelt my spelling words correctly
the orsin
The wata is bloo and sineeard rasi danw the lic. and ti Sis wen
the
it droqs and we can her the ggling badling bee witavil. and it
smlis like a fliwis. And it smlis like slikwit. it fees cod and
and
slime. it fees like a wigle wim and wirs fa wand. it tasd like
nogling ni my mouth and I like SWish. sog and wit.
Good writing Mack. You have written lots about water. You have remembered to use full stops sometimes. You have tried to write words you don't know. Keep up the good writing.
ReplyDelete"You have tried to use capital letters and full stops. It is good to see you are trying in your writing, awesome work, Mack!" said Jaymee.
ReplyDelete"You have tried to spell your words right and have put some punctuation in your writing, awesome Mack. You are a star!" said Nina.
" I can picture what you have written in my head. Congratulations Mack, you are a star!" said Evie.
"You got lots of your spelling words right. Good job, Mack,said Oscar.