Trees.   By Timmi

I am learning to write.

Success Criteria:

I can:

• hold an idea in my head long enough to write it down

• start my writing with a capital letter and end it with a full stop

• hear and write the first sound in some words

• spell some words correctly

• write one or two sentences about the topic

• try to use capital letters and full stops

I neD WoTU To gRow I neD sun to are liT AnD I neD Siol for fiT  AnD I neD SpaS to grow AnD Bes came AnD geet Natner.

Mother Earth,     By Olivia

I am learning to write.

Remember to:

• plan using a graphic organiser
• write several simple and compound sentences using different sentence beginnings
• try words I don't know using rhyme, blends, digraphs, chunks and letter sounds
• use a variety of simple conjunctions correctly such as and, but, because, then and so
• improving my writing  by checking it makes sense and my punctuation and spelling is correct 
  
  
  

Spiky grass, rainbows shooting up high, dancing waterfalls, animals playing, volcanoes erupting, people laughing, and babies crying and sparkling water are on earth. Mother Earth is a peaceful place to be with all the things we need to survive.

Food, air, water, clothes and shelter is what we need. We are lucky to live on earth. I love earth.

 Earth.  By Ben

I am learning to write

Remember to:

• plan my writing using a detailed picture and a few key words
• write at least three sentences about the topic
• write my ideas in order
• write using simple sentences and begin to use compound sentences
• write a range of high frequency words
• use some personal vocabulary
• use my knowledge of letter sounds to try new words
• correctly use capital letters and full stops most of the time
• use word and alphabet cards (including class brainstorm)
• reread as I write to improve my writing

Earth is the only planet that people live on. Earth is a wonderful place because of  the beautiful trees and the very nice nature. People live on this planet because it has air. 

Seasons.  By Evie

I am learning to write.

Remember to

•  start my writing with a capital letter
• end my writing with a full stop
• write the first and last sound in some words
• spell some high frequency words
• write one or two sentences on a topic
• try to use capital letters and full stops correctly

We are learning to comment on someone's writing


Remember to:

• say how the writing makes you feel
• say what you like about the writing
• look at the remember tos and see if the writer has remembered to do them

The four seasons aer Summer , Autumn, winter and Spring.

In winter it is wet, snowy and cold after that comes the storm the storm. In winter we all wear womclos.

In Summer it is hot and go swimming after that thay all og to the iceblocks and than thay all go in thesea because thay are all has hot has thay can  be anb thay doon  have long nist and thay is wot thay bo in summer.

In spring thr clorin like to pik flwers for ther mums anb the son is hot and they neeb to rmebaer to wer san hats  

because the san is verey hoot. the bees come anb sreb the polm inot  oher flowers thay aer so bisey all bay they wok so hab.

In autum the leavs forl off  the tree. The sun is vrery hot. when you Step on the leaves. I jup in the leavs.  It is fun. The leaves aer reb orange.

The four seasons are summer, autumn, winter and spring. 

In winter, it is wet, snowy and cold and after that comes the storm. In winter we all need to wear warm clothes.

In summer it is hot and they go swimming. After that they all go to get ice blocks. Then they all go in the sea because they are as hot as they can be. They don't have long nights but long days and that is what they do in summer.

In spring the children like to pick flowers for their mums and the sun is hot. They need to remember to wear sun hats because the sun is very hot. The bees come and get the pollen and spread the pollen into other flowers. They are busy all day because they work so hard.

In autumn the leaves fall off the tree. The sun is very hot. When you step on the leaves, I jump in the leaves. It is fun. The leaves are red and orange.