Wednesday, 6 November 2013

Dirt Biking   By James

I am learning to:
  • use punctuation in my story
  • spell some words correctly in my writing
Success criteria: I can
  • start a sentence with a capital letter
  • end a sentence with a full stop
  • spell my spelling words correctly
  • write down all the sounds in words in the right order





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  1. Anonymous6 November 2013 at 18:49

    Congratulations on winning a cool trophy! Thank you for sharing it with the class.
    You have usually used a capital letter to start a sentence and a full stop to end it. You have spelt some of your spelling words correctly and tried to spell others. I like the way you tried to use exclamation marks. Well done!

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  2. Anonymous8 November 2013 at 20:57

    " You used capital letters and full stops. Well done!" said Olivia.
    "You got some spelling words right. Good job, James!" said Ethan.
    "You tried to write about what you saw and a cool thing. Congratulations, James," said Jade.

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