Room 15 Christmas Writing

We are learning to write for an audience

Success criteria: I can

• use exciting words
• put detail in my writing
• ask questions
• use punctuation such as !
• bold some words

Christmas.   By Olivia
In December, it is going to be Christmas, YAY! From Santa I really, really want a tummy stuffer. We are going to Nelson to camp there. it is a big, BIG campsite.
Did you know that nelson is at the bottom half of N.Z.?


For Christmas I am going to the Christmas Parade in Howick. Me and Josh will be watching but my cousin will be in it!
I will not get as many presents because I am going to Hawaii.
People go caroling at other stranger's houses.
I would like to spend my Christmas with Evie!
By Jaymee


Christmas. By Nina
Christmas is soon. I can not wait until Christmas because we hang our stockings and some bells and make our Christmas list to give to Santa. Santa's elves make all the list of things you made and they are presents for you!


I am going to my Jammy's to share presents with my family! We get to have a family dinner! it is yummy!
By James


I am going to Great Barrier Island the week before Christmas. It will be hot there. We will get sunburnt if we don't get sun cream there. We love Great Barrier Island. I love islands.
By Mackenzie


Christmas. By Oscar.
Christmas is about having fun with your family and the children think Christmas is about the present but it is about having fun with your family.


Christmas. By Ben
Christmas is when Jesus got born.Children get presents! Santa comes in December. He comes in a sleigh. In the morning there are presents under the Christmas tree.


On Christmas I am having a Christmas tree. I have some decorations to put on it. I give Santa Claus some coke and a cookie. For the reindeer, I give them a carrot. I have lots of family time. Sometimes my dad has to go to work.
By Zoe


Christmas. By Johnny
I like Christmas because we do carolling, have cookies, milk, strawberries and we have lots of presents.
Santa has a big fat beard and a big, fat tummy and big fat black boots.
I want a box that can give me everything!


"Do you know Xmas is coming? It is So, So,SO soon!"
"Ho, Ho, Ho!" and Here comes Santa!"
"Oh, I love it so much!"
I get lots of presents at Christmas. At Xmas me and Chloe go behind the Xmas tree and wait for Santa!
On the weekend me, my Mum and my sister put the Xmas tree and put the decorations on it.
By Emma


Christmas. By Austen
Christmas is inly 6 weeks away and I like it because I get lots and lots and lots and lots of presents for Christmas.
This year I would like a remote control car, a boat and plane. I would like 5 red handballs and maybe even an ipad.


Christmas is very important to us and if you are bad and you are mean to your mum, you don't get presents. If you are good you get presents and babies get them too and you get dogs presents. Sometimes you get presents and you don't know who it is from.
By Lily


At Christmas, Santa comes to every house in the land! We all have to send letters to him. Santa has a big, big, big sack, full of presents! he has a big bed.
By Evie


Christmas. By Timmy.
Santa came to my place and he put a mountain of presents under the Christmas tree. Next he went past my bed. I got a car too and I played with it in the morning and I feel great.


This year I am going to Taupo for Christmas. my cousins are going there from Palmerston North. It takes three hours to Taupo. We might be sleeping in Grandma's room or maybe in the garage and in the night I wonder what I will get. In the morning I hear bells chiming.
Jackson


Christmas. By Ava
On December, it will be Christmas. Santa will come. We will get presents. It will be cool. I love presents so, so SO, SO, so much!


What Christmas is about. By Jade
"Did you know Jesus was born on Christmas?
I do not know why, do you?
I really want to know but we will come back to that, o.k.?
Let's go back to last year when it was Christmas Eve and we're all ready to have great time the next day.
Sh! Sh! Sh!Sh! Sh!
O.K.?
We're here at the old tome. We have friends. Hey!
Here is a good present from Nina. At CHristmas we remember we have good friends."


Santa has a sack. Santa's house is at the North Pole. I can get presents. I can eat.
By Kaleb


Santa came into my house and put a present on the ground and I got some toys and I got a rugby ball.
By Francis


I saw Santa in the city. We saw a man shooting a gun. Mum and I got wet.
Shaun