Room 15 Christmas Writing

We are learning to write for an audience

Success criteria: I can

• use exciting words
• put detail in my writing
• ask questions
• use punctuation such as !
• bold some words

Christmas.   By Olivia
In December, it is going to be Christmas, YAY! From Santa I really, really want a tummy stuffer. We are going to Nelson to camp there. it is a big, BIG campsite.
Did you know that nelson is at the bottom half of N.Z.?


For Christmas I am going to the Christmas Parade in Howick. Me and Josh will be watching but my cousin will be in it!
I will not get as many presents because I am going to Hawaii.
People go caroling at other stranger's houses.
I would like to spend my Christmas with Evie!
By Jaymee


Christmas. By Nina
Christmas is soon. I can not wait until Christmas because we hang our stockings and some bells and make our Christmas list to give to Santa. Santa's elves make all the list of things you made and they are presents for you!


I am going to my Jammy's to share presents with my family! We get to have a family dinner! it is yummy!
By James


I am going to Great Barrier Island the week before Christmas. It will be hot there. We will get sunburnt if we don't get sun cream there. We love Great Barrier Island. I love islands.
By Mackenzie


Christmas. By Oscar.
Christmas is about having fun with your family and the children think Christmas is about the present but it is about having fun with your family.


Christmas. By Ben
Christmas is when Jesus got born.Children get presents! Santa comes in December. He comes in a sleigh. In the morning there are presents under the Christmas tree.


On Christmas I am having a Christmas tree. I have some decorations to put on it. I give Santa Claus some coke and a cookie. For the reindeer, I give them a carrot. I have lots of family time. Sometimes my dad has to go to work.
By Zoe


Christmas. By Johnny
I like Christmas because we do carolling, have cookies, milk, strawberries and we have lots of presents.
Santa has a big fat beard and a big, fat tummy and big fat black boots.
I want a box that can give me everything!


"Do you know Xmas is coming? It is So, So,SO soon!"
"Ho, Ho, Ho!" and Here comes Santa!"
"Oh, I love it so much!"
I get lots of presents at Christmas. At Xmas me and Chloe go behind the Xmas tree and wait for Santa!
On the weekend me, my Mum and my sister put the Xmas tree and put the decorations on it.
By Emma


Christmas. By Austen
Christmas is inly 6 weeks away and I like it because I get lots and lots and lots and lots of presents for Christmas.
This year I would like a remote control car, a boat and plane. I would like 5 red handballs and maybe even an ipad.


Christmas is very important to us and if you are bad and you are mean to your mum, you don't get presents. If you are good you get presents and babies get them too and you get dogs presents. Sometimes you get presents and you don't know who it is from.
By Lily


At Christmas, Santa comes to every house in the land! We all have to send letters to him. Santa has a big, big, big sack, full of presents! he has a big bed.
By Evie


Christmas. By Timmy.
Santa came to my place and he put a mountain of presents under the Christmas tree. Next he went past my bed. I got a car too and I played with it in the morning and I feel great.


This year I am going to Taupo for Christmas. my cousins are going there from Palmerston North. It takes three hours to Taupo. We might be sleeping in Grandma's room or maybe in the garage and in the night I wonder what I will get. In the morning I hear bells chiming.
Jackson


Christmas. By Ava
On December, it will be Christmas. Santa will come. We will get presents. It will be cool. I love presents so, so SO, SO, so much!


What Christmas is about. By Jade
"Did you know Jesus was born on Christmas?
I do not know why, do you?
I really want to know but we will come back to that, o.k.?
Let's go back to last year when it was Christmas Eve and we're all ready to have great time the next day.
Sh! Sh! Sh!Sh! Sh!
O.K.?
We're here at the old tome. We have friends. Hey!
Here is a good present from Nina. At CHristmas we remember we have good friends."


Santa has a sack. Santa's house is at the North Pole. I can get presents. I can eat.
By Kaleb


Santa came into my house and put a present on the ground and I got some toys and I got a rugby ball.
By Francis


I saw Santa in the city. We saw a man shooting a gun. Mum and I got wet.
Shaun

Water.  By Jackson

I am learning to:

• use punctuation in my writing
• spell words correctly
• write using different types of sentences
• improve my writing

Success Criteria: I can

• start my sentences with a capital letter
• end my sentences with a full stop
• Use !, and ?
• spell my spelling words correctly
• try to write new words using what I know
• write simple and compound sentences
• use different conjunctions
• check my punctuation is in the right place
• highlight my spelling tries and fix some

Every thing in the would need's water. aal of the animals and

 all oof the insects, and people. Did you now 70% of your 

podey is water. is one of the precious thing's. Water is bluy 

and sparkly. some is frozen. watere is written as H20.

                                         I 

Water is blue like the say. in the sun it sparkles like jilry . In

                          on the rocks   

 storm's it crashis  and hot Water blibl and blobls. I can hear

                                                                              When

 hal ston's smaking my windo tring to get in side. Wen it hals 

it sonds like 25 posims dansing on my roof. When we tip the

parth  water it sonds like gasling. After a ship has crashed

 lot's of oil leks out. When you canin ball into a pool it smills 

                                                                                        When

like clorin. Water feel's dibaly and all of the tempcha's. when

 water is madey it feel's slimy. and yaky. When it splats on my

                                                        its

 fase. Water tastes like plan and it tasts  rfeshing. Soult water

                    It          down

 tasts grous. it drips bown my face.

Water.  By Mack.

I am learning to use 

• punctuation in my writing
• spell words correctly in my writing
• improve my story

Success criteria: I can

• start my sentences with a capital letter
• end my sentences with a full stop
• use a capital after a full stop
• spell my spelling words correctly
• listen carefully for the sounds I can hear and write them down in order when trying new words
• check I have put full stops and capital letters in the right place
• check I have spelt my spelling words correctly

We need water to siviv We is nile ewer. water is in a krer and 

the orsin

The wata is bloo and sineeard rasi danw the lic. and ti Sis wen
                                                                      the
it droqs and we can her the ggling badling bee witavil. and it

 smlis like a fliwis. And it smlis like slikwit. it fees cod and
                                                          and
 slime. it fees like a wigle wim and wirs  fa wand. it tasd like

 nogling ni my mouth and I like SWish. sog and wit.

Dirt Biking   By James

I am learning to:

• use punctuation in my story
• spell some words correctly in my writing

Success criteria: I can

• start a sentence with a capital letter
• end a sentence with a full stop
• spell my spelling words correctly
• write down all the sounds in words in the right order