Dingle- dangle Funny Scarecrow. By Johnny
I am learning to organise my ideas
Success Criteria: I can
- write my ideas in order
- put my ideas about the same thing together
- use words like first of all, next, and then
I am learning to write my ideas with some detail
Success Criteria: I can
- write more than two ideas
- write my ideas with some detail
- use ideas from my plan
Dingle-
Dangle Funny Scarecrow. By Johnny
I’m
a dingle-dangle funny scarecrow. My head is scary and my hands have wood and
hay. My feet and I cannot walk because I am not real. Farmers sometimes build
scarecrows so that they scare birds away from their juicy corn. I scare away
the birds that are soaring through the air, in the blue, cloudy sky.
"It is cool because you have used interesting words," said Shaun.
ReplyDelete"He used a highlighter to identify lots of his spelling tries in his story. Next you need to try and fix these," said Johnny.
"I like your exciting words," said Timmy.
"You put your ideas in order. Well done!" said Ben.
" You should be happy because you have used green highlighter and then green pen to fix your mistakes and to add detail with exciting words," said Mackenzie.
Johnny, you have made your writing interesting by using interesting words and adding detail to it. It is good to see you trying to improve your writing independently. Mrs Singh
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