Seasons.  By Evie

I am learning to write.

Remember to

•  start my writing with a capital letter
• end my writing with a full stop
• write the first and last sound in some words
• spell some high frequency words
• write one or two sentences on a topic
• try to use capital letters and full stops correctly

We are learning to comment on someone's writing


Remember to:

• say how the writing makes you feel
• say what you like about the writing
• look at the remember tos and see if the writer has remembered to do them

The four seasons aer Summer , Autumn, winter and Spring.

In winter it is wet, snowy and cold after that comes the storm the storm. In winter we all wear womclos.

In Summer it is hot and go swimming after that thay all og to the iceblocks and than thay all go in thesea because thay are all has hot has thay can  be anb thay doon  have long nist and thay is wot thay bo in summer.

In spring thr clorin like to pik flwers for ther mums anb the son is hot and they neeb to rmebaer to wer san hats  

because the san is verey hoot. the bees come anb sreb the polm inot  oher flowers thay aer so bisey all bay they wok so hab.

In autum the leavs forl off  the tree. The sun is vrery hot. when you Step on the leaves. I jup in the leavs.  It is fun. The leaves aer reb orange.

The four seasons are summer, autumn, winter and spring. 

In winter, it is wet, snowy and cold and after that comes the storm. In winter we all need to wear warm clothes.

In summer it is hot and they go swimming. After that they all go to get ice blocks. Then they all go in the sea because they are as hot as they can be. They don't have long nights but long days and that is what they do in summer.

In spring the children like to pick flowers for their mums and the sun is hot. They need to remember to wear sun hats because the sun is very hot. The bees come and get the pollen and spread the pollen into other flowers. They are busy all day because they work so hard.

In autumn the leaves fall off the tree. The sun is very hot. When you step on the leaves, I jump in the leaves. It is fun. The leaves are red and orange.