Success Criteria:
- Title
- Who, what, when, where, why and how
- Sequence of events in order
- At least three different ideas
- A personal comment
WALT: Improve our writing
Success Criteria:
- Re-read my story to check the writing makes sense
- Add detail
- Check my spelling attempts
- Change punctuation such as full stops and capital letters
In the weekend I stayed in my big home doing my dress for the wearable arts show. My dress is pink with red spots. My dress is turning out good. In the wearable arts show I hope I come first. By Nina
Nina, I can see that you have followed your success criteria and made sure that you have included three ideas. Next time remember to include a title.
ReplyDeleteI would love to see your dress when it is finished. Good luck for the Wearable Arts Show.
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