Trees. By Timmi
I am learning to write.
Success Criteria:
- hold an idea in my head long enough to write it down
- start my writing with a capital letter and end it with a full stop
- hear and write the first sound in some words
- spell some words correctly
- write one or two sentences about the topic
- try to use capital letters and full stops
I neD WoTU To gRow I neD sun to are liT AnD I neD Siol for fiT AnD I neD SpaS to grow AnD Bes came AnD geet Natner.
Timmi, I like the way you wrote about what trees need to survive. You listened carefully to sounds you could hear in words and tried to write them down.
ReplyDelete"I could picture the things in my head," said Ben.
ReplyDelete"It told me what plants needed," said Mackenzie.
"It is good writing," said Kaleb."
" I can do most of the 'I cans' in my writing,' said Timmy.
''I can picture me trying to keep my plant alive,'' said Jackson.
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